Sunday, May 16, 2010

Graceling by Kristin Cashore (3 stars)

I'm a sucker for superpowers books, and the 'graces' in this novel got me interested.  I initially loved Katsa's power, and her internal conflict over her actions as King Randa's pawn.  Unfortunately she turns out to be a Mary Sue: not only is she the best fighter in the world, she is also the best hunter and survivalist, doesn't get hungry, doesn't feel pain, doesn't need sleep, cannot get lost, and is the inspirational leader of an underground government fighting for justice.

I also found her relationship with Po fairly annoying.  She takes ages to realise Po (who is a Gary Stu with his own set of amazing powers) couldn't be more perfect for her, and when she does she gets really...angry?  What the?  This passage where she wakes up in a rage for no reason is just bizarre:
Katsa didn't know what was wrong with her when she woke the next morning.  She couldn't explain the fury she felt toward him.  There was no explanation; and perhaps he knew that, because he asked for none.
There is also a very strong anti-marriage message from Katsa, which seems misplaced.  I get it, she is a strong willed, independent woman.  So why should that change if she gets married?  Maybe Cashore was just trying to make a point about women's rights in medieval times.

The climax comes and goes within a page.  It seemed weird that Cashore created a bad guy with such a cool power, then killed him so quickly.  I would have liked to have seen a war campaign waged between The Council and Leck.

I still enjoyed the book, and the battle with Leck in the forest was great.  Not bad for a first novel.

3 stars.

Thursday, May 13, 2010

The Lost Symbol by Dan Brown (1 star)

Da Vinci Code: entertaining, Angels and Demons: meh..OK, The Lost Symbol: sucks.

This book is horrible: formulaic Dan Brown, with a really boring and obvious ending.  It annoyed me in so many ways it is hard to know where to start.

Katherine is supposedly a genius whose work in the field of Noetics is going to change the 'entire world forever'.  But somehow she fails to be suspicious of a doctor who has supposedly been treating her brother (despite Peter never mentioning it), who invites her to his creepy house, wears a creepy amount of makeup, and manages to invite himself into her super-secret laboratory.  As an aside the field of 'Noetics' in the real world, sounds like downtown quacksville.

The other characters are cliches stolen from weird places - Sato is totally 'Edna' the crazy designer from the Incredibles, and does Mal'akh the giant tatooed fanatic sound a little like Red Dragon to anyone else?  Or perhaps the crazy albino, but with tattoos?

Brown seems to have hired a technology consultant for the 'hacking' section since he mentions traceroute and whois, but screws it up with sentences like:
Trish, this IP has a funky format.  It's written in a protocol that isn't even publicly available yet.  It's probably gov intel or military.
I'm running a diagnostic, and this firewall coding looks...pretty serious.

An IP address written in a protocol no-one else uses isn't going to be that useful now is it?  In fact it won't even be an Internet Protocol (IP) address unless it conforms to the Internet Protocol.  A serious firewall is just a whole lot of closed ports, and there is no 'coding' exposed to the outside.  But no-one gets hacking right, and I digress.

The 'national security' issue that looms over most of the novel is pissweak.  Oh no, some important people will be embarrassed in a video.  Who cares.  I thought Mr. Red Dragon had bought a nuke or something.  And why is the CIA the ones running all over DC chasing this guy, shouldn't it be the FBI?  Or weren't they sexy enough?

Brown uses a really annoying, lazy phrase to describe a memory flashback:
...Mal'akh flashed on the only other woman he had ever killed.
As Langdon tried to process what Katherine had said, he flashed unexpectedly on the gnostic Gospel of Mary...
'flashed on'???  What the?

The ending couldn't have been more obvious.  If you haven't picked where the ancient mysteries are located within the first 20 pages, you need to turn up your 'really obvious plot point' detector.  Also, worst treasure ever.  Seriously.  Why the hell would you go to all that trouble to hide something so boring and commonplace?

The dénouement is the worst part of the whole book - pages of cobbled together references pointed in the vague direction of a hand-wavy philosophy conclusion.  And it sounds like this:
...the Bible and the Ancient Mysteries are total opposites.  The mysteries are all about the god within you...man as god.  The Bible is all about the God above you...and man as a powerless sinner.
Blah blah blah.  Right at the end Brown builds us up for another big reveal that is...a sunrise.  Yay.

Did you notice there were exactly 33 points made in this review?  Not really, but if you believed that you will probably enjoy this book.

1 star.

Tuesday, May 4, 2010

My War: Killing Time in Iraq by Colby Buzzell (2.5 stars)


The initial impression the author gave me was that he is a loser, a stereotypical no-hoper who hasn't ever worked hard in his life and had to cheat on the drug test to get into the army. As I read, my estimation of him improved, he is actually quite intelligent, well-read, and not a bad writer.

The book is a product of Colby's blog, which he started while deployed in Iraq (despite thinking blogging was 'nerdy'). It became incredibly famous as a no-holds-barred unofficial account of the war from someone who was living it.

Unfortunately as a book, it still feels very bloggy. It is a mostly factual account of 'we went here, this happened', and except for the early part of the book, has little reflection from Colby.

It was interesting reading this after the Accidental Guerrilla, because I read first hand about how ineffective the US was in Iraq. I was amazed to read about soldiers playing Playstations on their big screen TVs (bought from the PX) in air-conditioned shipping containers on the Forward Operating Base (FOB), then rolling out in armoured Strykers for search-and-destroy missions. They were completely ineffective at stopping insurgents from mortaring the base every single day:
we didn't catch a single one of those mortarmen in the act of mortaring our FOB the entire time we were there.

2.5 stars.

The Accidental Guerrilla: fighting small wars in the midst of a big one by David Kilcullen (2 stars)


I saw (on TV) Kilcullen give a fascinating address at the press club in August 2009, which prompted me to read his book. It was a pretty tough read. In Kilcullen's own words:
This book, like its wars, is a hybrid...perhaps too academic to be popular and too populist to be purely academic.

It definitely errs on the textbook side of things, with very dense text. Having said that, Kilcullen presents a interesting analysis of a number of insurgency-based conflicts, with a focus on Afganistan and Iraq. He analyses the tactics that have been used, their problems, and details why the (mis-named) 'surge' in Iraq was effective due to a switch to a counterinsurgency approach. Kilcullen, an Australian, rose spectacularly to fame to become Petraeus' most senior counterinsurgency advisor in Iraq.

Kilcullen agrees with the Chinese PLA authors of Chao Xian Zhan (Unrestricted Warfare), in that:
Western countries, particularly the United States, had created a trap for themselves by their very dominance of conventional warfare. Confronting the United States in direct conventional combat would indeed be folly, but rather than eschewing conflict, other countries or even nonstate actors could defeat the superpower through ignoring the Western-defined rules of "conventional" war, instead applying what the authors called the "principle of addition": combining direct combat with electronic, diplomatic, cyber, terrorist, proxy, economic, political, and propaganda tools to overload, deceive, and exhaust the US "system of systems."

and
strong countries would not use "unrestricted warfare" against weak countries becuase "strong countries make the rules while rising ones break them and exploit loopholes...[The United States] has to observe its own rules of the whole world will not trust it."

Can the US change how it wages war? Maybe not:
...And because capabilities for irregular or unconventional conflict are much cheaper to acquire than those for conventional conflict...they are paradoxically less likely to be developed...a substantial portion of the American economy, and numerous jobs in almost every congressional district, are linked to the production of conventional war-fighting capacity.

Kilcullen chooses the term takfiri to refer to Islamic terrorists:
The doctrine of takfir disobeys the Qur'anic injunction against compulsion in religion (Surah al-Baqarah: 256) and instead holds that Muslims whose beliefs differ from the takfiri's are infidels who must be killed. Takfirism is a heresy within Islam: it was outlawed in the 2005 Amman Message, an initiative of King Abdullah II of Jordan, which brought together more than 500 'ulema (Islamic scholars) and Muslim political leaders...in an unprecedented consensus agreement...Al Qa'ida is takfiri, and its members are universally so described by other Muslims.

Kilcullen presents four models to represent the current threat environment, which are neither exhaustive or mutually exclusive. They are the 'Globalization Backlash' thesis, the 'Globalized Insurgency' model, the 'Islamic Civil War' theory, and the 'Asymmetric Warfare' model. I won't address them all, but here is a quote on the Islamic Civil War theory:
...the Islamic civil war thesis suggests that the primary threat of takfirism is against stability in the Arab world and the broader Muslim community worldwide, and only secondarily against Western governments and populations. By intervening directly against AQ, this theory suggests, we have not only waded into someone else's domestic dispute but have also treated AQ as a peer competitor worthy of our top priority and full attention, thus immensly increasing AQ's credibility and clout in its struggle for ascendancy over the ummah.

On asymmetric warfare:
the 9/11 Commission estimate that the 9/11 attacks cost AQ between $400,000 and $500,000, plus the cost of training the 19 hijackers in the United States prior to the attack. This would make the 9/11 attacks the most expensive terrorist attack in history. But when one considers that the attacks inflicted a direct cost of $27.2 billion on the United States, and that subsequent operations in the "War on Terrorism" have cost about $700 billion to mid-2008, it is clear that the cost of the attack to America has vastly outweighed its costs to AQ...

the United States has so far spent $1.4 million per dollar of AQ investment in the attacks on the response.

The coalition screwed up in Afganistan by being out-governed by the Taliban at the local level. While the 'international community is training Supreme Court judges and seeking to build an Afgan legal system based on the post-2001 constitution', the Taliban is providing practical dispute resolution and legal services throughout southern Afghanistan, a 'shadow judiciary that expanded Taliban influence by settling disagreements, hearing civil and criminal matters' etc.

Counterinsurgency is all about providing security for the population in their local area, ie. it is population-centric rather than enemy-centric (where enemies are hunted down and killed in sweeping manoeuvres):
the more organized, locally present, and better armed a group is, the more likely it is to be able to enforce a consistent system of rules and sanctions, giving the population the order and predictability it craves...

The idea is to maintain a persistent presence to draw the enemy out of hiding into attacking your defences. This was proven to be much more effective in Iraq during the surge than the previous enemy-centric strategy of search-and-destroy sweeps that killed many civilians and provoked a public backlash.

On page 121 Kilcullen provides a brilliant description of the 'dialogue of the deaf', which perfectly characterised the disconnect between Americans trying to reduce incident numbers as a measure for success for congress, and the Iraqis trying to protect the population.

There is so much quotable in this book I could go on forever, but this is already too long. Needless to say, I found the book very interesting, although I often found myself saying 'well, Duh', because some of the observations and strategies seemed to be common sense. In any case, I'm so glad someone with that common sense is now advising the American military.

A few to end with.
I have shown how most of the adversaries Western powers have been fighting since 9/11 are in fact accidental guerrillas: people who fight us not because they hate the West and seek our overthrow but because we have invaded their space to deal with a small extremist element that has manipulated and exploited local grievances to gain power in their societies.

In terms of strategy, the Iraq example indicates that for us to invade foreign countries with large-scale unilateral military intervention forces simply plays into the AQ exhaustion strategy already described, creates space for the infection of societies by extremism, and prompts contagion to the wider world. (As successive intelligence estimates have shown of Iraq, the conflict has exacerbated extremism worldwide, and as noted actual violence has spilled over into neighboring countries, and further afield, as has radicalization.)

This explains a lot:
Why did most countries (including those who opposed the Iraq war) believe in 2002 that Saddam Hussein's regime had WMDs? Because they were intercepting the regime's communications, and many senior Iraqi regime members believed Iraq had them.

Despite learning a lot from this book I can't give it a high score because it is such a hard read - it is extremely wordy, dense, and has a fair bit of repetition.

2 stars.